Dear Friend,
Trust you're doing well! I'm writing to let you know that I moved to Canada with my husband. I stay in Montreal which is south coast of Canada. Weather of the state is extremely cold, it goes to -10 degree celsius during winter. And as you aware of the fact that, I love snowing weather which we have celebrated last year during our visit to Bolton. Let me tell you one exciting news I have joined a multinational company for the job Software Development in Continuous Integration Process in Health care domain. If you remember, I got rejected for the same position last time. I just got lucky this time!
Moreover, I love everything about my present life which is quite adventurous in nature. Main reason to choose this country is a challenging life with full of adventure, a perfect weather and last but not the least the career growth with a spark in the project. As you know, how much a great career important in anyone's life especially someone like me who is so passionate about good work and a right platform. Having all, Canada provides the citizen to live a healthy and wealthy life such as education and medical are free of cost here. Now, I can save a lot of money to fulfill my parents dreams, which is lot more important to me than anything in this world.
Thanks!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Friend, Trust youre doing well! Im writing to let you know ...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Dear Friend, Trust youre doing well! Im writing to let you know that I moved to...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54700854701 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46903535481 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.379541976 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166619953965 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548775236467 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395991411889 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117913082397 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115012112818 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.