Good diet and a better approach towards exercise are immensely powerful to grow a healthy body with a wise brain. Therefore, the topic physical education should be mandatory for all the students in all the classes. We are living in an era of digital world where we all are buys with indoor games/activities so as our children. There is an article in a discovery magazine, where a Health Research Center has claimed that people during 19th and 20th century had a long lasting life some of theme lived for 130 years and more. And those people were farmers, workers, sports men and women etc. Because they served their entire life doing physical activities.
I personally think that there a lot many advantages and disadvantages of exercises. The advantages are it builds a healthy life style, increase a muscular immune system. A body becomes more energetic and flexible to handle any situations as it's soothes your brain at the same time. A body feels more energetic while studying, working , cooking or any other tasks done by a human. Which, makes a human more victorious in the world. However, let's move to see the dark part of it, if a body is doing the same exercise in a wrong way or without a proper guidance. It's going to create damages in the body for an example, back pain, wrist pain etc. which can be a disaster in anyones life.
One of my friend is the best example of the physical activities, He met with a brain surgery of high grade temporal lobe in 2014. Doctor suggested that he may paralysed if any seizer attacks towards his body. He should have a proper diet and exercise plan to avoid such attacks. He was so obsessed to come out of the danger and followed his routine doing proper exercise to save his life. As a result , he is a cure man.
I truly recommend educational system to more focused about the chapter name physical education. So one can save his life following the subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64117647059 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5339526115 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2522029982 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1428571429 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1904761905 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197168518268 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522095737052 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107411829713 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106496576227 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104333771789 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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