Hi,
I am writing this letter to acknowledge you that I am planning to apply the seperation form with all the due respect of all the mentors, team and the organisation. Firstly, I would like to thanks all for the commendable position provided by the firm and all the help and guidance by the extremely energetic team.
I have aimed to achieve a post graduation in AI and Machine Learning course in abroad which is also a dream of my parents. I am working since my childhood to reach the goal set by my closure ones. I am happy to share with you that i have cleared my GMAT exam and ranked 5th in the competitive exam. I am eligible to opt 100% scholarship from the Liverpool University, which is again a good news and i can optimise my savings towards my sister's marriage.
Finally, In light of my future aspects, I would love to join my dream company which is none other than the Google post higher education. Later, I have plan to open my startup company after gaining knowledge from the sea of technology. I wish to meet you all during my visit to india.
Many Thanks,
Shahin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'thank'.
Suggestion: thank
... organisation. Firstly, I would like to thanks all for the commendable position provid...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... reach the goal set by my closure ones. I am happy to share with you that i have ...
^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and ranked 5th in the competitive exam. I am eligible to opt 100% scholarship fro...
^
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...versity, which is again a good news and i can optimise my savings towards my sist...
^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...le post higher education. Later, I have plan to open my startup company after gainin...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.505 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58348117857 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.116049267 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106475177414 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454538598168 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481828076778 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758807626442 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175171955351 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.