You have decided to leave your current employment. Write a letter to your employer. Include the following in your letter:
– Explain why you are writing
– Explain why you have decided to leave the company
– Tell your employer what you plan to do after leaving your present employment
Dear Mr Fred,
I am writing to let you know that i am resigning from the company. I have been working with ABC Medical Centre as a resident physician for the past ten years and i believe it is time for me to move to another phase of my life. I hereby tender my resignation letter.
I plan on travelling around the world. When i got married last year, i informed my wife, who is a nurse that we would explore the world. So we decided it is best to embark on the journey before we start having our own children, because it will be tedious to go on global exploration with them.
We will be travelling across the globe, which would take approximately eleven months. We plan on staying in Africa, Senegal to be more precise, for about two months, where we will join other voluntary workers in taking care of the sick people. After that, my wife will return to the country while i will go on a self discovery journey to Jerusalem for a week.
Thank you for being a wonderful boss.
Yours sincerely,
Ben Ray.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Fred, I am writing to let you know that i am r...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., I am writing to let you know that i am resigning from the company. I have b...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nt physician for the past ten years and i believe it is time for me to move to an...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me to move to another phase of my life. I hereby tender my resignation letter. ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hereby tender my resignation letter. I plan on travelling around the world. Wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...an on travelling around the world. When i got married last year, i informed my wi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he world. When i got married last year, i informed my wife, who is a nurse that w...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40740740741 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42358076741 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2245655262 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7272727273 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11463974093 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491989964797 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452396065894 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670412538821 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395828073816 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.