Dear Friend,
I am writing this letter in reference to the holiday which we spend together. Firstly, I am grateful to have such enthusiastic friend who made my last week so special and memorable, which i am going to share with my parents. However, we always leave something behind good things, This time i have missed my wallet at your place. As you aware of the fact that i carry all the important stuff like my passport, credit card, driving license and my visa in the wallet.
Unfortunately, I forgot to mention you that i have to leave India by early morning tomorrow on emergency work ground. Would you please mind sending my wallet through your driver by midnight so that i will be able to catch my flight. Apology to being so immature as always. I promise to you that i think twice to bother you next time with whom i share different experiences travelling all over the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...st week so special and memorable, which i am going to share with my parents. Howe...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ur place. As you aware of the fact that i carry all the important stuff like my p...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...through your driver by midnight so that i will be able to catch my flight. Apolog...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...flight. Apology to being so immature as always. I promise to you that i think twice to...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mature as always. I promise to you that i think twice to bother you next time wit...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...twice to bother you next time with whom i share different experiences travelling ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5625 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50994895366 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.1525982062 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259977319163 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101808519077 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558691668806 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201605877754 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514344395399 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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