It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sports should be compulsory for all students in all bokf
A proper diet and daily physical workout is important to develop a healthy society. Hence, these culture should be cultivated among younger generation, as early during school ages. As a result, it is very important that, physical activities and play session should be given priority on the curriculum for all. This is necessary, due to the lack f knowledge on proper workouts and low amount of time spent on games.
Firstly, the students do not have basic idea on an effective way of exercising. This lack of knowledge will lead to unnecessary health hazards such as, bone fractures and spine problems. In addition, they should also be taught on the benefits will be gained by daily workouts, for instance, weight loss and blood circulation. Therefore, the physical education will focus on positives of it and the negatives of not doing exercises.
Secondly, the sports in school is crucial. Considering much of the time spent in social media and private classes, the toddlers have few leisure hours to pay. This creates the need colleges to make students to follow the sports they like, for example, cricket and football. Moreover, this will help them create more energy and absorption ability in their own subjects. As a result, students should be motivated to involve in play activities for their development.
However, the educational institutions should pay attention on their internal resources as well. Adding to that, they should have a playground and sporting facilities. More importantly, there should also be trained and authorized trainers for the instructions for the desired outcomes. In fact, the schools with financial constraints, should be supported by local authorities and old boys' association to fund those facilities.
when all the above are considered, physical curriculum and sporting activities should be look after and developed. These will benefit in a good health condition the students and to avoid any negative consequences. Furthermore, the resource availability in developing it should also be focused.
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Suggestion: When
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33746130031 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90415678933 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7562628742 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314183777245 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088645910765 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726904500304 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172787854131 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281000581628 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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