Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you and your family well. Firstly, I want to apologize that I am writing to you after a long time.
As you know, I recently shifted to Canada; I have been busy making arrangements for the new house since my arrival. Life here is quite different from India because the weather is extremely rough, and also I have to travel thirty miles to the office daily. Although traveling consumes a lot of time, I enjoy it the most due to the natural beauty of Canada. The cost of living is high, so I am planning to do a part-time job soon.
After a lot of consideration, I felt that Canada could provide me the opportunity to develop my career as a software engineer, thereby choosing it for permanent residency. Moreover, I got a chance to work at the Google headquarters here with relatively high remuneration and advanced technologies as compared to India. These factors were the primary reasons for selecting Canada rather than any other country.
I would like to invite you to Canada and stay with me for some time. Please write back soon, awaiting for your response.
Best regards,
Deepak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... planning to do a part-time job soon. After a lot of consideration, I felt tha...
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Line 10, column 94, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
... for some time. Please write back soon, awaiting for your response. Best regards, Deepak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72864321608 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65184787728 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673366834171 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6619997386 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4166666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14322006463 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502020940878 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621952226149 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10095496896 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743754915335 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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