You moved to a new country and you want to write a letter to your previous co-worker
- Where did you go and describe your feelings
- What are you doing there? (a job)
- Invite your friend to come
Dear Ruby,
How are you doing? Hope everything is okay with you!
The reason why I’m writing to you is that because, we didn’t talk much after I left the organisation. I was so busy packing things in order to start a fresh in Canada. This was a last-minute choice which life provided me to choose a different career path. I was so nervous and feeling low to leave my birth country, but however, when I got here everything just changed. Life seems to be very simple without any complications. In fact, I started learning French!!
Currently, am working as an assistant for National Wide Geography photographer. This work makes me very much thrilled as I work closely with such a famous personality, who had completed major projects with wild animal life. I had always dream of this job and when am on it, I’m at cloud nine.
So, I was wondering that why don’t you come over here for your vacation this summer. I bet you, your children will love the experience of watching wild animals so close. Let me know what are your plans.
See you soon!
Best Wishes,
Ramya
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|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-05-16 | Shraddanand | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 317, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
... feeling low to leave my birth country, but however, when I got here everything just change...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 12, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...started learning French!! Currently, am working as an assistant for National Wi...
^^
Line 6, column 238, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
...cts with wild animal life. I had always dream of this job and when am on it, I’m at c...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67708333333 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56139881488 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713541666667 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3926866881 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0769230769 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22923507288 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853868853705 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877984735564 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158614726053 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125238921337 0.0580467560999 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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