Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, I am planning to have a sabbatical leave.
Of late, I enrolled for a master’s degree in Data Science course; this would assist me in my career progression. Final examinations are nearing by and there have been tons of symbols left for me. In order to fulfill my dreams, I require to leave from 1st January to the 31st of January.
Am I well aware of the project which has been assigned to me and I have been planning to finish the same by extending my work hours in the coming days. I do have a VPN connection, which can allow me to connect to the office network after business hours. If required, I would like to bank on this flexibility to work on weekends.
John, my best pal at work has agreed to take my responsibilities while I am away. I have already briefed him about the assignment and follow meeting has been scheduled for a complete knowledge transfer.
I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing this letter to inform ...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leaving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: leaving
...n order to fulfill my dreams, I require to leave from 1st January to the 31st of January...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67403314917 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82176066705 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9346962165 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134740681776 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520515447629 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354142483951 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061752573179 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410096221211 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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