It is an unarguable fact that white-colored employees have been migrating to developed nations from their own developing countries or from poor countries. This could be because rich countries can offer a good paycheck as well as a better work environment for skilled migrants. As a result of this poor countries are affecting furthermore. However, by taking some measures nations can put this trend under check.
First of all, migration of professionals can lead to potential job vacancies in niche technology industries, which is hard to fill by any other working citizens. For instance, the IT industry is suffering due to a lack of manpower in many countries. Apart from this, if there are no surgeons then providing high-end health care would be extremely difficult for any nation. On top of this, coming up with either new highways or building affordable homes will hit the grounds if there are no engineers or architects. As a result of these, there won’t be any development in poor countries and eventually, it will impact their economy.
In order to overcome the mentioned problems, bureaucrats should start providing high paychecks especially to skilled professions. Governments should start thinking about providing a few other benefits such as tax exemptions, affordable health insurance plans for those who are seeking new job opportunities in other countries. On the other hand, officials can also provide few subsidies to the industries and encourage them to set up offshore development centers so that they can provide more secure jobs to the citizens.
Loosing of talented workers will defiantly affect any country especially in terms of economy. Developing nations or poor countries should provide more flexibility and good salaries in order to keep them in the motherland. Otherwise, the migration trend will increase in the future as well.
- Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment 61
- When people commit serious crime in most countries they are sent to prison What are the advantages and disadvantages of this approach 78
- You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letterSay where / when you went on holidayExplain why you are not satisfied with your holidayTell them what you would like them to do 87
- Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas What are your opinions on this 84
- You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen, but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter•Describe the problem with the equipment •Explain what happened when you pho 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... work environment for skilled migrants. As a result of this poor countries are aff...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...y other working citizens. For instance, the IT industry is suffering due to a lack of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31313131313 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96329199275 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7733028123 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160082486354 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547934820409 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360634280843 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999215433323 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546747970463 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.