Dear Sir,
I am Neha, a resident of Maharaja enclave. I am writing this letter to suggest some improvements in market of the area.
Actually, I am a shopaholic person. A visit to the local stores after every three days is my fixed routine. It is my favourite pass time, because there are varities of shops in the area and they all have unique products. The market never fails to surprise me as it accommodate stores ranging from the shops of needle and threads, to car showrooms.
However, shoppers mostly struggle to find a parking place near the area. Cars are mostly parked on the roads of market, which blocks the passage and this has caused accidents many a time. Moreover, the shopping complex lacks washrooms and the whole market stinks, becaue people urinate anywhere they want.
To make the local shopping square more desirable, the authorities can build seperate parking areas. Also, restrictions on bringing vehicles inside the shopping hub would help to tackle this problem. Along with it, government can construct public toilets in the market and recruit workers to clean them regularly.
Hoping for a prompt action!
Yours truly,
Rita
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- Some people feel that entertainers ( eg. Film stars , pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid 78
- The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The governement should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The governement should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am Neha, a resident of Maharaja enclav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99481865285 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49334263527 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694300518135 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7031326249 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1538461538 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136400579232 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449081913027 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041109268601 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605995601181 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174597039448 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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