You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:
• say in general what you like about shopping in your area
• say what is wrong with the facilities
• suggest how they can be improved
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen, who a loyal shopper of our local stores. Lately, I have noted a few flaws of some shopping facilities in our area. Thus, I am writing this letter regarding these minor problems and a proposal to improve our local stores.
Generally, I find that most of the stores provide all demanding products and the services are undeniably favorable. Those are the reasons why I have been a loyal customer for almost 10 years. However, I think the location of food stores is not easy for the joggers to reach. Since these shops are too far from downtown, everyone has to go on bikes to get there. Furthermore, these shops are located on a narrowed street, so it always gets traffic during the rush hours.
Therefore, I may suggest that you could work with the authorities to relocate these facilities to somewhere closer to the town’s center. I believe the community will be much happier and appreciated when their favorite food stores can be reached on foot.
I hope that you would consider my proposal in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
Truong Nguyen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84656084656 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56362174171 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8012539685 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207213687799 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632389938403 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399699490716 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977808979669 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158197969175 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.