Write a letter to your friend to invite your friend as you are organizing a party for family.
Explain why you are inviting
Tell him about your plans
Why his presence is important
Dear Tom,
I hope you’re doing well. i’m just writing to let you know that i’m throwing a party for my son, tim, later this month.
It is to celebrate the approval for his admission at Bach Khoa technology university and also his birthday which is May 25th. this is a special event and I want to show him how proud I am to his success.
I still haven’t planned the detail of the party yet but I think tim’d be happy with a simple barbeque night in my backyard. i’m just going to invite some close friends and relatives to join us. And, this might sound crazy but maybe I’ll let him drink alcohol if he wants to try because he’s 18 and apparently old enough.
you know that you’re the most important part of this party because you’re tim’s godfather. I have to admit tim even loves you more than he loves me. you’ve always been there to support him when I couldn’t. So, you really can’t say no this invitation my friend.
All the best,
Truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I&apos
... Tom, I hope you're doing well. i'm just writing to let you know that i&a...
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Suggestion: This
...nd also his birthday which is May 25th. this is a special event and I want to show h...
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Suggestion: I&apos
...a simple barbeque night in my backyard. i'm just going to invite some close frien...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...apos;s 18 and apparently old enough. you know that you're the most importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, may, really, so, still, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75977653631 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65304903933 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698324022346 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1341674474 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17209962955 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074396988301 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484888467381 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113435755692 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477220553774 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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