Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Some say that television is undermining humans’ lives and damaging social experiences by consuming people’s time radically. I completely side with this notion for television is making viewers lazier every day.
Indeed, television is the main culprit of people’s laziness in this day and age. Since this is such a convenient method of relaxation, individuals, especially the young, are becoming more attached to the TV screen and thus, ignoring everything else. For adults, many workers do not pay attention to their job at the workplace and reduce their productiveness because they are used to the comfort of their couch combining with the entertainment of TV shows. Likewise, youngsters are becoming indifferent to their study at school for television is much more tempted.
What is more, television is also terribly destroying individuals’ social lives. Instead of hanging out with friends and colleagues to extend connections, people rush home and watch their favorite TV series alone after work or school. Even worse, individuals do not care to have a talk with other members in their own family. This is what is called ‘social isolation’ and has been a concerning problem of the society recently. In Vietnam, for example, people just do not socialize as much as before because they prefer staying at home watching television. In the long term, this may cause some mental issues such as autism or depression which then lead to other severe consequences like self-hurting by viewing too much violence and horror movies.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that television is creating massive problems for humans since it totally takes control of people’s free time thought TV is a great means of relaxation. Ideally, a balance between television and life would minimize these matters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...too much violence and horror movies. In conclusion, I firmly agree that televis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, may, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38811188811 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07523992425 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643356643357 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1386587361 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220773199696 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074682478734 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487534079297 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14232860594 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282255266197 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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