You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing!Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service.Say when and how you ordered the cheque book.Ask how much longer you will have to wait ]ask the manage

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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing!
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service.
Say when and how you ordered the cheque book.
Ask how much longer you will have to wait ]
ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir,
I am writing this epistle to inform about the bad services being provided by your bank and additionally inquire about the chequebooks which I had ordered from the bank two weeks ago. Let me explain the situation.

To elucidate two weeks ago I had visited your branch office at Central Park Road to deposit some cash additionally I also placed an order for a chequebook at the online kiosk. As per the receipt generated by the machine, I was supposed to receive the chequebook by last week but it has been two weeks and I haven't received anything. Despite my repeated calls and the assurances being provided by the bank, the issue has not been resolved until now thus I would like to request you to look into this matter.

May I know how long shall I need to wait for the chequebook additionally I would also like to know what action you will take to resolve this matter so that such incidents are not repeated time and again.
I look forward to your immediate response and speedy resolution.
Yours sincerely
Ben

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this epistle to inform abou...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...st week but it has been two weeks and I havent received anything. Despite my repeated ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and speedy resolution. Yours sincerely Ben
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51488362559 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8201948599 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207087000667 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727827901771 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522886356705 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109679470599 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551677026955 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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