You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the m

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You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inquire about my chequebook which I had ordered two weeks ago from your branch office. I would like to inform you that I haven’t received it till date. Let me explain in detail.

To elucidate I hold a salary account with your bank which was recently opened by my employer to credit my salary. The account opening procedure involved me to visit one of your branches in the City Centre where I needed to sign some documents thus during this signoff procedure I requested a chequebook to be delivered to my mailing address. Although I was supposed to receive this chequebook within seven working days it has been two weeks now. Additionally, I would like to highlight here that despite my several reminders and follow up calls with your customer service team no concrete resolution was provided therefore my patience is running out and I am dissatisfied with the poor banking service.

Hence I would like to know how long I need to wait till I receive the chequebook. I would also need a detailed explanation of the actions which you will take to provide a speedy resolution.
I look forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely
Said

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inquire abo...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...fied with the poor banking service. Hence I would like to know how long I need to...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur immediate response. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, so, therefore, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81067961165 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73881499014 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2021954292 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152338509122 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587016619559 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432589851138 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988046586757 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620572629902 0.0580467560999 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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