Many people believe sport lessons are important in school timetable. Both boys and girls should take part in sports. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Sports in gaining immense popularity globally. Many tertiary institutes are making sports lessons compulsory part of their curriculum whereby both boys and girls are encouraged to take part in the sports activities. I completely agree with the above statement and in my opinion, sports lessons and activity helps not in the physical growth of the juveniles but also make them mentally strong.
Firstly being a sports professional is a considered a successful profession in modern society. The financial rewards sportsmen get are as good as an engineer, doctor. Hence many schools are encouraging juveniles to participate in sports activities which can enable them to turn into successful professionals. Although there are a plethora of adolescents who pursue sports as a hobby and later on choose it as a profession however there are many who show no interest in sports. For instance, in India, many people landed into a successful profession by choosing cricket, hockey, and soccer which are considered popular sports.
Additionally sports activities make adolescents competitive and professional at a juvenile age. The lessons learnt from sports can be later implied into personal as well as professional life for success. For instance competition knowledge, identifying key strength and weakness, a winning strategy can be instilled in juveniles while they play sports and later on can be used as a key skill in their corporate careers. Moreover, nowadays as a part of hiring exercise most of the fortune 500 companies apart from tertiary education give equal importance to extracurricular activities like sports while selecting candidates. For instance companies like Google, Facebook have selected candidates in the past with sports background.
To conclude it can be derived from the above statements that sports lessons should be made a mandatory part of school curriculum therefore young children should be made to participate in sports activities and competitions. This will not only help in their personal growth but also lead to an increase in employment opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...hich are considered popular sports. Additionally sports activities make adolescents comp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47678018576 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06347648763 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7427826422 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.933333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258534520392 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816670592609 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750600617686 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165354230071 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082867260964 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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