you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Amanpreet Kaur, and I have my bank account in your bank State Bank of India, Patiala Branch, and through this letter, I would like to register my complaint regarding the cheque book service.
Kindly allow me to elaborate on this matter. Firstly, I ordered a new cheque book since 14 of July, now it has been two weeks, but still, I did not get this. Secondly, I applied this by online bank service which is served by your bank. When I made a request for a new cheque book then I got a message of transaction. Moreover, the amount for a new cheque book is already paid by me via online mode.
It has been a long time. I need this cheque book to make a payment for our companies clients owing to this I want this on urgent basis. Therefore, I would like to request you to look at this matter personally. If possible could you tell me the time period, your bank will take to send this at my home address?
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Amanpreet Kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40740740741 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35006419344 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613756613757 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7680034426 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232720312992 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772209521848 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516102960441 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122990466598 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564305877107 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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