You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my gratitude for the service I was offered on 20th of December when I visited your hotel along with my family and friends to celebrate the 90th birthday of my father.
Most of the respected guests were in their early 90s except me and my sisters so the party was arranged to keep in mind the choice and age requirements of elderly people. Your staff went out of the way to make the party memorable by providing cool seating arrangements on the seaside with melodious classical music. The waiters were professional and polite and obviously, they were seasoned enough to avoid to encroach too much on the proceedings.
Food was not only incredibly tasty but also fully nutritious and fresh to satisfy the hunger and fun requirements of elderly people (with poor stomach and weak teeth) in a safer but astounding way.
In your team Mr Ali was just a bright boy, he got his all colleagues more organized to follow our requirements.
Please accept my gratitude, and extend my regards to your staff
Yours faithfully,
Noor
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- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 78
- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 73
- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 78
- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 73
- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my gratitude for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ebrate the 90th birthday of my father. Most of the respected guests were in the...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid encroaching'.
Suggestion: avoid encroaching
...obviously, they were seasoned enough to avoid to encroach too much on the proceedings. Food w...
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... encroach too much on the proceedings. Food was not only incredibly tasty but a...
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...k teeth in a safer but astounding way. In your team Mr Ali was just a bright bo...
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...organized to follow our requirements. Please accept my gratitude, and extend m...
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...e, and extend my regards to your staff Yours faithfully, Noor
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85869565217 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6927359752 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9816284341 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.714285714 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172143286355 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665000346271 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438769754064 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709740860088 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043854019248 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.