You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Estimable Manager,
I wanted to express my appreciation for the immaculate arrangements and superior service received at your magnificent hotel on my aunt 90th birthday.
The place was less noisy and melodious classical music with dim lights ambiance made the atmosphere warm and cozy. Since the event was attended by most of the elderly people, they loved such calmly environment. The waiters were professional and polite particularly Mr. John have been impassioned and cooperative sorting out much and take care of our requirements.
My aunt adolescence companions got a chance to see one another following a significant number quite some time. They might not stop discussing those times from claiming their youth, at they might meet every day.
The quality and presentation of the food provided was remarkably committed and everyone feel gratified. The same dives with those beverages served to lodging at the right temperature to expend for full delight. Although the deck was bit uneven which I noticed but this complaint is ignorable.
Please accept my gratitude, and extend my regards to your staff.
Yours Faithfully,
Ali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lights'' or 'light's'?
Suggestion: lights'; light's
... and melodious classical music with dim lights ambiance made the atmosphere warm and c...
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Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir youth, at they might meet every day. The quality and presentation of the food...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...for full delight. Although the deck was bit uneven which I noticed but this complai...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oticed but this complaint is ignorable. Please accept my gratitude, and extend m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3687150838 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88323367455 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.759776536313 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6014330657 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118050091711 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400743941581 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411209864139 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553796180178 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455465737927 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.