You placed an online order for a flower vase. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Write a letter to the manager of the company.
In your letter, you should:
Give the details about the equipment.
Explain the damage.
Suggest what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir/ Madam,
With due respect, I am writing this letter to make a complaint about a flower vase which I purchased from your website.
At the onset, I had ordered a flower vase of pink colour on dated 31st April 2021, from your website www.flowerpetal.com. The flower vase was of 16 inches long in height and the bottom of this was painted with black colour. As the cost of flower vase was USD 250, I made the online payment by using my Bank of America credit card ending with no 5628.
Further, I placed my order at my office address A 108 Bridge stone, London which had to deliver on 1st May 2021, but I received it today only. Packing of the flower vase is not up to the mark. While opening the packaging material, I saw that flower vase was damaged from the bottom because the same was not packed carefully with proper material. Consequently, I dropped an email to your company for receiving the damaged product and requested them to initiate the refund. They have asked for few details and process the refund for my order.
Lastly, I would request you to refund my money directly to the source as it has been more than 5 days but I have not received any update regarding my pending refund. Last but not least I would suggest that you use proper packaging material with extra attention to the materials that can be broken easily during transits. I will beneficial for the both company and customers and help in preventing from the losses.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully, Date 7th May 2021
James Anderson
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 399, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., I dropped an email to your company for receiving the damaged product and reques...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Date 7th May 2021 James Anderson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, lastly, look, may, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 282.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62765957447 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48988951993 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.1519610217 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2142857143 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268251170065 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840460790532 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341416092518 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121070242458 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463843300927 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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