Dear Mr.John,
I am writing to enquire about your three weeks advance English course which is going to start from next month. Since I have registered myself for the IELTS test, I would like to enroll myself for this course.
I am a graduate student from India. Although I have completed my education through English medium board, I am intended to excel my level from intermediate to advance. I am wondering to opt for a full-time job in the Marketing domain, to get the job I require to score at least Band 8 in IELTS. As I have heard positive feedback about your school, therefore, I am keen to join it at the earliest.
Would you mind if you share the fees structure of the course? Recently, I have come across the discount deal of the program.
I would appreciate if you provide insight on foreign student accommodation service at your school.
Thanks for all your time and assistance. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Ankit Mehta
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- Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary Others think that the job itself is the most important What do you think is the most important aspect of a job Include specific details and examples to support your choice 1 I 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: John
Dear Mr.John, I am writing to enquire about your ...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'scoring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: scoring
...keting domain, to get the job I require to score at least Band 8 in IELTS. As I have hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7485380117 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61296863262 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643274853801 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6298110227 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6666666667 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183033924192 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652514771171 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566060171371 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111447955146 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187703382786 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.