You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• Tell him which team won
• Describe the conditions on the day
• Say how you felt about the match
Dear Jacob,
How are you keeping up and I hope you are recovering fast? I'm writing to update you on the outcome of the football match with chelsea football Club.
As you know, the game was scheduled for March 19, 2019 and it was held as promised between Machester United and US-Chelsea. Gladly, our team won the game narrowly with a two goals to one. Although, the game was though because Machester united scored within twenty seconds the game started. This put so much pressure on us , knowing we desperately needed two point to move to the semi finals. We cannot afford to lose the match and be kicked out of the tournament.
As for the weather on the day of the tournament, it was a rainy day as the weather was cloudy all through the day and we had to play the match inside the drizzling. Overall, we tried a a team but we would have done better if you were around to play the defence role in the game.
Please rest well and I wish you a speedy recovery.
Regards,
Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jacob, How are you keeping up and I hope you ar...
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Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... up and I hope you are recovering fast? Im writing to update you on the outcome of...
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Line 4, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ster united scored within twenty seconds the game started. This put so much press...
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Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...started. This put so much pressure on us , knowing we desperately needed two point...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...inside the drizzling. Overall, we tried a a team but we would have done better if y...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...inside the drizzling. Overall, we tried a a team but we would have done better if...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...inside the drizzling. Overall, we tried a a team but we would have done better if y...
^^^
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wish you a speedy recovery. Regards, Jones
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, as for, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41530054645 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29414785198 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8856478637 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178688329992 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656508648625 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546425861972 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117858371431 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555758901079 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.