You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in the hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• say how you felt about the match
• ask how he is doing
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Joseph,
Hello, how are you? I hope you are feeling much better. I am writing this letter to give you the highlights of the match you missed.
Last Thursday we had a match of football in our college and our entire team was missing you a lot in that match. I would like to give you this exciting news that our team “The Red Dragon” has won the match. Though it was tough as you were not there, but our team members’ hard work and practice gave us the opportunity to bring the trophy in our college.
It was a very exciting match. Both the teams were excellent in their game scoring 2-2 points. In the end there were just 5 minutes left and it was a very tough situation for us to goal and earn one more point. But to our luck Andrew was able to do the goal and we won the match.
I hope you are having a speedy recovery and will soon will be able to join the college. The team is planning to visit you on Friday. I hope it is fine with you.
Take care and see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou soon. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.195 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15220236037 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4303121102 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.9333333333 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273508516022 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106981091565 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635601946777 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157027324063 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709150355151 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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