You read an article in a magazine recently which might be useful for you and your friend’s job. Write a letter to your friend and describe an article and its content to your friend. Explain why it is good for you. Why would it be helpful for your friend?
Dear Matt,
Hope you are doing well and having a great job hunt. I am writing this letter to share some insights on an interesting article in a magazine which might prove beneficial in your job search. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I read an alluring article last week in the magazine “Satellite and Cable TV" which shared insights about the new technologies and trends which will be impacting the satellite industry. Although the article provided in-depth knowledge about the market disruptive LEO constellation which will be launched by one-web however it did not provide conclusive information on its commercial launch and deployment. In nutshell, the article published stated that One-Web will be launching a total of 640 satellites in Low earth constellation with latency less than 50 milliseconds specifically for applications like the internet of things, consumer broadband, machine to machine communication.
Since we both are actively looking for opportunities in the telecom industry, therefore, knowledge of such trends will not only help us to answer technical questions related to low earth orbit satellites but also create a good impression in the mind of interviews that we are aware of the latest trends.
I hope you will find the information useful and I look forward to seeing you soon.
Regards
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...th knowledge about the market disruptive LEO constellation which will be launched...
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...shell, the article published stated that One-Web will be launching a total of 640...
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...band, machine to machine communication. Since we both are actively looking for o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31775700935 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03739755568 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663551401869 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.353900696 44.8134815571 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.25 76.5299724578 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248555136023 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875239546849 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653813558246 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138510517146 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068882430743 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 8.37731958763 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 8.71597938144 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.