You recently about equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You called te sop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
-describe te problem wit te equipment
-explain what happened when you phoned the shop
-say what you would like te manager to do
Dear Sir and Madam,
My name is Nita Davis and I am one of your frequent customers. I am writing this letter to report the faulty Chimney that I purchased from your showroom on Tuesday last week.
On Tuesday, 18th December, I visited your store and bought a chimney for my new modular kitchen. Te model no. of the product is N0654IKJ. When I assembled the product and fix into a particular place, it started for some time but then it stopped.
As soon as possible, I called on your shop and asked one of your customer support executives to resolve the issue. He then assured me that my chimney would be replaced or fixed within two working days. I am disappointed to say that as not happened yet and I ave received no communication since then.
I am exceedingly infuriated with bot te quality of the product I purchased from your store. I think this problem will be resolved promptly, I expect to receive a replacement of chimney or my current chimney repaired but only if it could be fixed in a day.
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours faithfully,
Nita
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-24 | kajal juneja | 81 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir and Madam, My name is Nita Davis and I am one of yo...
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Line 17, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he product I purchased from your store. I think this problem will be resolved pro...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nly if it could be fixed in a day. I look forward to hearing back from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64102564103 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.639028371 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7412429253 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6153846154 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191818948525 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710114222308 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506767811937 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812721956549 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419976923111 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.