Dear Mr. Fernandes,
I am writing to you in regard to requesting permission for sharing my experience and information from a conference that I attended at Hong Kong recently. It would be great if I could get an opportunity to give a presentation in relation to this.
In order to maintain interest throughout the presentation, I would be adding a lot of pictures, instances as well as activities in between the presentation.
Since most of the information which I have collected is about marketing strategies, my presentation would be mainly focused on ideas of client mining and public relations.
I look forward to the participation of mostly Marketing and Business Development team members as the topic of my presentation would be beneficial for them. To make the most of this session, I would recommend having this conducted in the auditorium so that I can create a live example scenario while presenting the presentation.
I hope to get a positive answer from you. I will look forward to your approval of this.
Yours faithfully,
Karishma Banerjee
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25396336043 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8753449714 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233965606712 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874235614485 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548655861074 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115211577048 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905928659546 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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