You recently attended a meeting at a hotel When you returned home you found you had left some important papers at the hotel Write a letter to the manager of the hotel Say where you think you left the papers Explain why they are so important Tell the manag

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
Say where you think you left the papers.
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir,

I’ve visited your hotel two days ago, I had a business meeting there. Now I’ve come home in Ukraine and realized that I left a file with my papers in your hotel. There is no doubt I left it there, because they were put on the table of the lounge which located on the second floor of the hotel. I remember I forgot to put them into my case.

Please, take a serious my problem, as these documents are very important for me. There private information about my bank accounts and transactions I’ve done for the last two years. So if I don’t receive my files, I will block all my credit cards and get a lot of headache to recover everything.

I want you to go to the lounge to check me documents. If they are missed, could you please ask your staff about them? For example, cleaner could put them away while he or she were cleaning that room.

Thank you in advance for considering my problem, I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards,
James Olson

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing from you. Kind regards, James Olson
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'no doubt']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210762331839 0.220444632235 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.161434977578 0.167888034529 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0224215246637 0.0606518309736 37% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0313901345291 0.0506257000042 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.161434977578 0.118615021944 136% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112107623318 0.107062808482 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0358744394619 0.041066498444 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38846096967 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269058295964 0.0385302599488 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0582959641256 0.0714148451538 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0134529147982 0.0191574576366 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00448430493274 0.00930345855455 48% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1005.0 1141.60824742 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.134020619 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52197802198 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.28021978022 0.284621296913 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208791208791 0.211203875043 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.120879120879 0.133321485273 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0604395604396 0.0843313296314 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38846096967 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681318681319 0.622163163488 110% => OK
Word variations: 73.146895978 62.8969750728 116% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.1666666667 16.4300151701 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7666618385 44.7399317507 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 90.9928171075 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.4300151701 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.613754768223 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 36.0457875458 37.5504026743 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.01265822785 1.13073093955 90% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294693332347 0.331212695627 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0715663526629 0.0927372745006 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.043200587727 0.0736520305886 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533992828604 0.579516596996 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176072777814 0.180689518051 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941428112338 0.122183219658 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879645888753 0.0765303033291 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.161843215118 0.211926503985 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0342214389473 0.0737400523855 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173992958047 0.203819188451 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677299255979 0.067151250289 101% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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