Dear Sir
I am writing this letter to inform you that, I have forgotten some important documents in your hotel during my stay there last week.
We had a business meeting and I was accommodated in room number 311. After my meeting, I came straight to my room and kept a file in the drawer of the table in my room. However, while checking out I forgot to collect my document file as I had to rush to catch my flight.
These paper hold a great importance for me, as they contain a classified information relating to my business. By any chance, if this file goes in wrong hands this will bring detrimental effect on my business and may lead to financial damage.
I request you to either check with the housekeeping staff if they have found this file, or, you go personally to the room and take this file in your safe custody. Along with this, please arrange to send this file to my address that is provided in your records.
I hope you will acknowledge the urgency of the matter and help me with the same on high priorities.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
Param Sabharwal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54822335025 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49942145899 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634517766497 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6196141659 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170501632262 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07649822456 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762500167074 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991173400676 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675081719588 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.