Dear Harry
I am glad to hear from you and hope you and everybody at home are doing well. Congratulations for completing your graduation with flying colours. I understand you are in dilemma, whether to continue with further studies or go for a job. I will be happy to suggest you the best option as per my opinion.
As you have successfully completed your Bachelours in Technology with terrific grades, this made you proficient enough for a decent job in Information Technology stream. Moreover, your parents have borrowed funds from friends and relatives for your graduation and if you go for higher studied they need to take more loan and I am sure with this kind of piled up debt you will not enjoy going to college.
However, if you go for a job you will be able to support your family and yourself. On the more, you will be able to repay all the debt gradually. Further, there are numerous merits of starting a job at an early age, like, more increments and chances of promotion. Furthermore, there are plenty of job opening in tech companies and this sector is growing dramatically. You can go for a job interview for posts of a software engineer, software tester and developer and so on.
I hope you will ponder about my advice and look forward to hearing from you.
Truly yours
Param Sabharwal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69396551724 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67660613877 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590517241379 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0033134997 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7692307692 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321608871916 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125161725042 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080338390998 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225078775527 0.12726935374 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135754240105 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.