Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concern over your consideration to shutting down the sports and leisure centre in our locality.
Firstly, this is the only sports centre available in the neighbourhood and everybody, whether children, adults or senior citizens use this facility to keep up with good health and fitness. Many people do morning and evening walk there. Besides this, youngsters play various indoor and outdoor sports. So, it is very important for all age group people. Moreover, amenities like this are essential for de-stressing and rejuvenate the mind of individuals as this is the place where people socialise.
There could be some detrimental effects of closing down this sports centre. To illustrate, young children may get annoyed if their playgrounds are shut down and this may lead them to indulge in anti-social activities. Moreover, senior citizens may find it difficult to go for a walk and catch up with their friends due to the closure of leisure centre. On the more, youngsters may not be able to practise their sports and physical activities.
I request you to keep this sports centre running for the welfare of society.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
Param Sabharwal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and rejuvenate the mind of individuals. As this is the place where people socialis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21105527638 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72805549997 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64824120603 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5067643286 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7692307692 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144518870388 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527458373231 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618165603672 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103352959503 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653868658728 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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