Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the performance of microwave oven – model MW3456 which I bought from your shop couple of weeks ago. Let me describe the situation to you. On 20th August, I got conventional microwave oven for baking cakes. It was working fine for 2 days after which it was not working. Even though I followed the instructions in the handout, I was not able to switch on the oven.
I tried to raise a complaint by calling the shop number, unfortunately, I didn't receive any positive response. I was told that one of the electricians will come and service the oven. But none of them turned out to the home. I have not received any update either by phone or by message after waiting for ten days. This is highly disappointing which precursors not to get any electrical appliances from your shop in the future. Please look into this issue at the highest priority and do the needful.
Hoping to get a prompt action from you at the earliest.
Yours’ faithfully,
Chitra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...lling the shop number, unfortunately, I didnt receive any positive response. I was to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68681318681 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79333331796 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2884564429 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6153846154 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207171639781 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635582028458 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458071807534 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118687537964 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318134837006 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.