It is an inevitable truth that most of the airline companies prefer to provide world-class services to the affluent people. Irrespective of the nation, this behavior is seen across the globe and the Dubai Airlines tops the list of the airlines that provide more benefits only to the business class people neglecting the economy class. In my opinion, biasing towards the business people is not advisable however it has some major impacts on the financial growth of the airlines which eventually boost the economic growth of the country.
Firstly, traveling in business class through Airline every time would not be affordable for the majority of people. Hence, about 60% of the people across the globe book their tickets in economy class. Even though there is more number of persons traveling through economy class, they are neglected and given inferior preference when compared to Business class people. Few of the key issues such as lack of customer service, chargeable baggage counters, not arranging the special services for physically disabled persons are observed in economy class. Despite the minimum difference between the ticket fares, airline often avoid providing free travel insurance to the humans traveling through economy class
On contrary, giving priority to the business class people which is about 40% of the people traveling through airlines fortifies the economic growth of the airline by 70%. Additionally, airlines can’t provide sophisticated service to all the people. They could not be able to provide comprehensive services like free online games, wi-fi and premium movies to every person traveling through domestic and international flights. Not only the perks but also the individual care would not be possible to be provided for all. It will plateau the financial profits gained apparently it will hinder the monetary growth of the country.
To sum up, even though few chief services are abstracted from the economy class and provided only to business class, it accelerates the overall profit of the airline as well as the country. Giving priority equally to both business and economy people is practically impossible. Nevertheless, people should be treated differently all together and the variance difference should be minimum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40563380282 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65605572559 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501408450704 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8041836784 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.933333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248157230758 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093887687616 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079350332486 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171031699859 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572181665782 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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