Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope this letter finds you hale and healthy. I would like to request a reference letter from you to apply for a new job. As you may know, I am currently working as a mechanical engineer in one of the esteemed company since 2015. Since I am passionate about learning new mechanics, I am seeking out new opportunities to exhibit my talents to the fullest.
I recently got an offer letter from "Hane Mechanics" which is my dream company. But they demand a letter of reference from any of my teachers or former employers while joining the company. As you know my strength and weakness very well, I think you are the right person to provide the same. Also you have been observing me since a decade. It will catalyze my chances of my permanent employment as well as it precursors them to give critical role to me.
Can you please provide your input about my accomplishments, roles and responsibilities, leadership skills that I possess in the letter? I have provided the details such as the contact person to be addressed, email ID, job description. Looking for a positive response.
Yours sincerely,
David
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e the right person to provide the same. Also you have been observing me since a deca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, so, well, while, i think, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00012710667 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8915779104 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25899802864 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907603276672 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656270232676 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16627987965 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248479370719 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.