In recent times, people opt for ready-more foods and processed foods rather than traditional foods. Irrespective of the fact that these types of food contains preservatives and chemicals to maintain the freshness of the product. However, these type of foods has its own advantages and disadvantages. Those consequences of the ready-made foods and processed foods will be analysed in this essay before a position is concluded.
There are certain advantages of having processed foods and ready-made foods. Firstly, it is easy to carry and doesn’t need any special preparation. The portability across the country fortifies the economic growth too. For instance, one of the prominent noodles brands “Maggi” is famous across the world and people prefer to have these kinds of processed foods during travel. It can be prepared just in couple of minutes which saves time and accelerates cooking. It goes through several tests to assure food’s quality. As this example shows, these kinds of foods are widely popular and subside hungry instantly.
However, there are quite disadvantages of consuming these processed and ready-made food. Mainly, the chief ingredient added MSG – Monosodium Glucamate is highly dangerous to health on long time. Moreover, for enhancing the taste of the product, the manufacturer add Kombu in addition to MSG which destroys immune cells. Children suffer from Autism if these kinds of foods are feeded regularly. Thus, the above mentioned disadvantages precursor for banning these types of foods in several countries like Canada, UK and the United States.
As the above discussion reveals, the disadvantages outweigh advantages of the intake of fast-foods, processed foods and ready-made foods. It is my hope that these foods are banned in our countries too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48745519713 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94675103863 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4622818791 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0555555556 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269068070116 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941191666215 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965389603676 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187263028682 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616128712164 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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