Nowadays airlines provide more benefits to the rich, often achieving this by reducing areas used by the economy class to provide more comfort to the first class passengers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, airline companies are sometimes decreasing the economy class’s spaces as a focus in first-class passengers’ convenience. I totally agree with that but, taking some points in consideration.
Many people thought that limiting the number of economy class's seats, Or even making the seat's space more confined is an unacceptable greedy behavior by the airline's companies, that is because of these companies need to make the best use of their customers either wealthy or not. for instance, some people may have an urgent situation or emergency case to catch a flight, suddenly they found that all seats reserved except the first class ones. As a result, they have to pay more money without any consideration to their social class or personal situation.
On the other hand, airline companies are always looking for a profit. Not only, but also, building a good image and reputation which helps them in a world of competition. Likewise, QATAR airlines and Etihad airlines from Qatar and Emirates respectively, they are targeting passengers from Europe and North America. So they tend to highlight the elegance of their first-class specifications. Consequently, travelers can be amused with the nice experience and feel comfortable more and more.
There is always should be a point of settlement, that is achieved by if companies have a big fleet to suffice the demand, this will enhance the time schedule for flights, moreover will decrease the waiting time. Furthermore, the costs will be decreased and hence a fascinating experience will be valid for all types of passengers.
To conclude, finding solutions for popular to easily catch their economic flights, keeping more convenient places for first-class travelers will help the society and keep airlines profit, I hope to find these solutions applicable in the nearest possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3698630137 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9668604976 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.344537327 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205515618566 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701130597471 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475686962473 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111900849244 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043470202633 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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