You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work You phoned the shop but no action was taken Write a letter to the shop manager In your letter describe the problem with the equipmentexplain what happened when you phoned the

Dear Sir or Madam,
Good Morning, I hope you are well and healthy always. My name is Arie Eko and I am of your loyal customers. In this letter, I would like to inform you about a problem with the electric stove that I bought in your store. I tried to solve calling on the phone, but no action to solve my problem was taken.
When I arrived at my home, I ran to my kitchen and rushed to try my new electric stove. To begin with, I connected the wires from the electric stove to the existing power source according to the user manual provided. After I follow all instructions for using the electric stove, the electric stove it doesn’t work. So I will explain in detail about the problems with my electric stove. First of all, the electric stove indicator light does not light up. But in a moment, the indicator light turns on and off again in a matter of minutes. Afterward, I listen some noise from the bottom of the electric stove like a storm with low volume, and make me afraid. Eventually, I saw some videos on the internet to see how to fix my electric stove problems. As a result, it’s the same and still doesn’t work.
In conclusion, I need your help really and hopefully, my electric stove can be used so fast, it is because my family needs for cooking every day. I will really be happy if you contact me, and I want to say thank you for giving the matter your attention.
Yours Faithfully,
Arie Eko

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...orning, I hope you are well and healthy always. My name is Arie Eko and I am of your l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, well, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 266.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34586466165 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3571518509 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4777458433 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186220198537 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670782826851 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718850844299 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165751559655 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109695911058 0.0580467560999 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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