You recently bought some food at the supermarket but when you go home you found that the food was in bad condition Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket In your letter explain what happened to you give details of the day and time of purchase as

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You recently bought some food at the supermarket, but, when you go home , you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter,
explain what happened to you , give details of the day and time of purchase.
ask the manager he/she intends to do about your experience.

Dear Sir,

Let me introduce myself. I am Bhumika Suryavanshi, one of the regular customer of your supermarket. I am intending to write this letter in order to lodge a complaint about the quality of the product that I have purchased from your store.

Elucidating the incident in detail, I had done shopping of my monthly grocery on 2nd Oct2016 Sunday at 5 PM from your store located at SG highway, which included four packets of frozen foods of the prevalent brand in it. I had confirmed with the expiry date mentioned on the packaging as well. However, when I arrived home and opened the food pa...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and opened the food packet to consume it , I found it spoiled due to the insuffici...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gue experience and dissatisfaction. I hope the issue will be considered on th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'really', 'so', 'well']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236363636364 0.220444632235 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.163636363636 0.167888034529 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0606518309736 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0318181818182 0.0506257000042 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.122727272727 0.118615021944 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140909090909 0.107062808482 132% => OK
Participles: 0.05 0.041066498444 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82344005169 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272727272727 0.0385302599488 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0863636363636 0.0714148451538 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00909090909091 0.0191574576366 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0181818181818 0.00930345855455 195% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1192.0 1141.60824742 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.134020619 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8431372549 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78085437643 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328431372549 0.284621296913 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259803921569 0.211203875043 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171568627451 0.133321485273 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107843137255 0.0843313296314 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82344005169 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.622163163488 102% => OK
Word variations: 65.3911254074 62.8969750728 104% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5454545455 16.4300151701 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3322843012 44.7399317507 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.363636364 90.9928171075 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.4300151701 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 44.5258467023 37.5504026743 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.34285714286 1.13073093955 119% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497926363961 0.331212695627 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0988359440366 0.0927372745006 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0763158687591 0.0736520305886 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530293086184 0.579516596996 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.229281813027 0.180689518051 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182452105861 0.122183219658 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101986073273 0.0765303033291 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331793772366 0.211926503985 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0545076352853 0.0737400523855 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319054745739 0.203819188451 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080214224806 0.067151250289 119% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.48453608247 269% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 4.73195876289 21% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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one of the regular customer
one of the regular customers

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 203 250
No. of Characters: 952 1500
No. of Different Words: 126 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.69 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.772 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.293 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.683 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5

one of the regular customer
one of the regular customers

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 203 250
No. of Characters: 952 1500
No. of Different Words: 126 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.69 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.772 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.293 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.683 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5