You have recently been on a business trip and faced some problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say .
- Give your flight details
- what was the problem you had faced.
- suggest some improvements for the future.
Dear sir,
Greetings of the day. I am Bhumika suryavanshi, one of the travellers of your flight no AI52G dated 15th September 2016. I am writing this letter to bring your immediate attention towards the problem faced by me during boarding procedure at the airport.
It so happened that I couldn't get time to take a hardcopy of my flight bookings due to a lake of time in catching the flight on time. However, I was carrying E-copy of my bookings on my phone which I had shown to the counter to avail my boarding pass. Under my surprise, the ground staff has refused to consider the E-copy which has came to me as a shock. Though after a continuous request, the lady took permission from her senior and issued me the boarding pass after validating my E-copy. I was so annoying that I couldn't lapse that incident from my mind and I have been inspired to address this issue to the airport management.
This entire incident took a time of ten minutes which could cost me lost of flight and so the loss of business for what I am travelling. I would like to request you to implement the scanning system of e-verification on Ahmedabad airport which is almost in practice at all other airports. This could not only save time but also save paper which is used to take print of ticket bookings.
I hope my suggestion would help the management to advance the procedures at airport for the convinience of people.
Thanking you ,
Yours faithfully
Bhumika Suryavanshi
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Essay evaluation report
a lake of time
a lack of time ???
which has came to me as a shock.
which has come to me as a shock.
Sentence: I hope my suggestion would help the management to advance the procedures at airport for the convinience of people.
Error: convinience Suggestion: convenience
flaws:
Which' is not used so properly:
I was carrying E-copy of my bookings on my phone which I had shown to the counter to avail my boarding pass
I was carrying E-copy of my bookings on my phone that I had shown to the counter to avail my boarding pass //that is better
Under my surprise, the ground staff has refused to consider the E-copy which has came to me as a shock.
Under my surprise, the ground staff has refused to consider the E-copy, which has came to me as a shock. //'which' modifies the whole sentence, so we need comma
This could not only save time but also save paper which is used to take print of ticket bookings.
This could not only save time but also save paper used to take print of ticket bookings. //we can remove' which is' here
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 262 350
No. of Characters: 1170 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.023 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.466 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.584 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.918 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.312 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.712 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... the airport. It so happened that I couldnt get time to take a hardcopy of my fligh...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...efused to consider the E-copy which has came to me as a shock. Though after a contin...
^^^^
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... validating my E-copy. I was so annoying that I couldnt lapse that incident from ...
^^
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ng my E-copy. I was so annoying that I couldnt lapse that incident from my mind and I...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...couldnt lapse that incident from my mind and I have been inspired to address this...
^^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... convinience of people. Thanking you , Yours faithfully Bhumika Suryavan...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255395683453 0.220444632235 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.187050359712 0.167888034529 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0251798561151 0.0606518309736 42% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0323741007194 0.0506257000042 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.104316546763 0.118615021944 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122302158273 0.107062808482 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0611510791367 0.041066498444 149% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64832175886 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0467625899281 0.0385302599488 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0971223021583 0.0714148451538 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143884892086 0.0191574576366 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0251798561151 0.00930345855455 271% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1474.0 1141.60824742 129% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.134020619 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64750957854 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78085437643 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306513409962 0.284621296913 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241379310345 0.211203875043 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172413793103 0.133321485273 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0919540229885 0.0843313296314 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64832175886 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.622163163488 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 59.3206250349 62.8969750728 94% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0769230769 16.4300151701 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6576286656 44.7399317507 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 90.9928171075 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 16.4300151701 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.613754768223 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.09278350515 287% => OK
Readability: 44.2148541114 37.5504026743 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.35555555556 1.13073093955 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356413925685 0.331212695627 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101856873769 0.0927372745006 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0594583341185 0.0736520305886 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.612086380788 0.579516596996 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134008399104 0.180689518051 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149142252224 0.122183219658 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800361686145 0.0765303033291 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.271837226123 0.211926503985 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0400431402323 0.0737400523855 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24871190408 0.203819188451 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486520380369 0.067151250289 72% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.48453608247 337% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.0206185567 50% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.03092783505 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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