You travelled abroad and faced some problem at the airport Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details what was the problem you had faced suggest some improvements for the future

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to aware you about the issue that I had faced recently with your air services.

Last week, I booked a ticket online dated 23 March for 2 persons. The journey is from India to Malaysia and the flight no is AI9434. I am a frequent traveler and usually I go via Indigo Airlines but I want to experience a business class travel hence, I had chosen you.

This time my journey was pathetic because my luggage was misplaced. Actually there was a halt of about 2 hours at New Delhi Airport and here your ground staff had removed my luggage in confusion with someone else. Due to this I had to bear a huge loss with regards to my business as it contains some important files related to a meeting for which I am travelling with my colleague.

Although your staff had admitted the mistake but this negligence costed me a huge amount. Also I came to know from supervisor that this happened because of shortage in workforce, but from one of the esteemed group in airline industry this is highly unaccepted. I believe you will close this gap on priority so that any one like me would not feel harassed. Moreover, I had to arrange the pickup of my goods after two days on my own but ideally it was your responsibility.

I hope you will give due consideration to this letter and may compensate in someway for the financial loss that I had bared.

Yours faithfully,
Roman Sid.

Votes
Average: 7.6 (12 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...s from India to Malaysia and the flight no is AI9434. I am a frequent traveler and...
^^
Line 9, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...his negligence costed me a huge amount. Also I came to know from supervisor that thi...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, may, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51750972763 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56442374297 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599221789883 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9787071278 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3076923077 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220855103846 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733519224276 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513703522543 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130271136828 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455257933113 0.0580467560999 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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