Dear Sam,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirit. There is a good news to be shared with you, that, finally I had purchased my own house.
Actually, you know my owner was not cooperative at all and every other day he make's noise on unnecessary things. Even, dad is getting retired next month and they also wish to stay along with me at Delhi. Thus, I decided to have a permanent home here, were all my family can unite again.
You will also love to see the house, how beautifully it is designed. There is an ample car parking space, along with a small kitchen garden, were we can grow vegetables on our own. Moreover, a lifetime access to leisure center is provided which has swimming pool, golf club, gym, etc.
Next week on 20th Feb, which is Sunday there is a small party followed by a dinner. Being my best friend I want you to be a part of this celebration. Apart from it, childhood friends from my village were also joining and meeting with you, my Canadian dude, is really surprising for them.
Always happy to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Roman Cook.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...the best of health and spirit. There is a good news to be shared with you, that, finally I ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, if, moreover, really, so, thus, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51485148515 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26721864069 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707920792079 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3981040326 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1538461538 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141585269733 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498897013705 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363399492412 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732661040928 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267519228395 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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