You recently bought some food at the supermarket, but, when you go home , you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter,
explain what happened to you , give details of the day and time of purchase.
ask the manager he/she intends to do about your experience.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to the purchased of items which I bought from your shop. I picked up 5 products from which one of the items bread got spoiled.
I am a regular customer of your shop, as like every weekly mostly on weekend I acquired some items from your grocery dated on 15.05.2019 and it was 12.00 noon. Once I reached home after 2 hours. While I unpacked the items and found that bread became wet and terrible smell was coming. First, I thought the eggs which I bought might be break and spilled over the bread which caused it wet. However, the eggs were in a good condition. Then, I checked the expiry date of bread it was 2 month back dated of an expired.
I request you to check all your items of expiry dates. Meanwhile, I wanted your staff to delivery me new fresh bread at my home because again coming down to your shop is inconvenience to me.
I hope you consider my above request and looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Best Regards
Roy
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-25 | aycorek | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-07 | sohailahmad | 89 | view |
| 2019-05-18 | Mohammed Saleem | 61 | view |
| 2018-07-20 | xxx123xx | 78 | view |
| 2018-07-20 | bindu983@gmail.com | 84 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... one of the items bread got spoiled. I am the regular customer of your shop, a...
^
Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'new fresh bread'.
Suggestion: new fresh bread
...ile, I wanted your staff to delivery me a new fresh bread at my home because again coming down to...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29141348798 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5658781 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175716033553 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564033342142 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523111124039 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112894299602 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497225214238 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.