You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents Write a letter to them and say Thank them for supporting you Describe how you spend your time Explain about your recovery process

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You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say

– Thank them for supporting you.

– Describe how you spend your time.

– Explain about your recovery process.

Hi colleagues,

I became really glad and excited when I received your cards and presents. It means a lot to me to have such a supportive and kind colleagues. I cannot wait to see you again.

However, as you know I have to spend the next couple weeks at the bed and give my leg rest as it has been broken badly in a car accident. I’m reading some astonishing articles about the current trend in industry and manufacturing which I couldn’t find enough time when I was working. In the meantime, I spend more time with my family and I can talk more with my nice and beautiful girl.

Nevertheless, I’m getting better and I had a visit to my doctor yesterday and he told me that I’ll be able to come back to work soon.

See you soon, guys.

Kind regards,

Sorena.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, really, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59027777778 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66565374281 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673611111111 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2860950763 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4444444444 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179259699314 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697360902938 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549986345075 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102862647057 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066618754837 0.0580467560999 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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