Dear colleagues,
I am writting to you to say a big thanks because of all your friendly well cards and all those nice presents. To be honest, I got a little bit surprized, when the postman brought those gift boxes for me. Actually, I was waitting for some packages from Amazon, and when I opnned the door, I saw twenty boxes. First I said maybe I made some mistakes in my purchases, but when I realized you sent me those gifts, I really got happy and surprized.
Anyway, I spent most of the time in bed. I read two story books by now. Specially the romen John sent for me, was so interesting. I am not allowed to walk more than one hour a day, therefore, I try to spend the days by reading and watching TV.
The treatment and recovery process going so well. Doctor told me from next week, I can start walking without steaks, and after three weeks I can get rid of all equipments they connected to my legs.
He told me from mid of next month I can join you in workplace. You don't know how much excited I am, to visit all of you again and work together.
At the end, I would like to say thanks again for all of your wishes and beautiful gifts that you sent to me. Hope to see you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Jac
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...se nice presents. To be honest, I got a little bit surprized, when the postman brought tho...
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Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... month I can join you in workplace. You dont know how much excited I am, to visit al...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, but, first, if, may, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2170212766 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2825335173 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1136095337 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0666666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284284767161 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858559203282 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820664517804 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157344510098 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945332251226 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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