You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
. describe what you enjoyed about the course.
. say how much cooking you've done since the course
. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with a warm thanks giving about the wonderful Chinese cooking techniques your school taught me in the June 2020 crash coarse batch.
Firstly, due to recent corona pandemic I had lots of leisure time and I want something to work with in my leisure time so I joined your school to learn cooking. Certainly, I was a fresher in Chinese cuisine. However, I was allocated teaching under the guidance of your freshy volunteer Mrs. Velma Fernandes.
Secondly, I would like to thank you for providing me a fantastic guide who taught me every Chinese cuisine in just one month. In addition, recently in one function when I cooked some meal, I got a great positive response.
To summarise, I would like you to have one South Indian cuisine coarse batch in next month so that I can learn that also. Looking forward for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Sunny Mehta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
.../Madam, I am writing this letter with a warm thanks giving about the wonderful Chine...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...e time so I joined your school to learn cooking. Certainly, I was a fresher in Chinese ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... in next month so that I can learn that also. Looking forward for your positive resp...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84076433121 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53538390155 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.388548367 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 4.34317383033 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160652809645 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541002842004 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390747818739 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931356868052 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351998309096 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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