Dear sir or madam,
I am writing with regard to your previous international cookery course that I have passed two months ago. In this letter, I have the intention to express my feelings toward this course.
To begin with, I can proudly say that your international course offers many beneficial features to me and I have had much great time while I was participating in this course. First of all, the instructors are the cream of the crop. Precisely, they are highly knowledgeable in the field of cooking and they are always supportive and patient while they were teaching how to cook new foods. Secondly, I am entirely delighted that I was being instructed in the place with a relaxed friendly atmosphere and helpful staffs to aid you all the time. Lastly, it is an irrefutable fact that the facilities that your institute have provided cooking students are up-to-date, second to none and easy to use.
During this 3-month course, I got familiar with a host of international cuisines ranging from French to Mexican food. I successfully cooked 3main dishes, 2 desserts and 4 appetizers and I have reached my parents' and friends' confirmation for almost all of them for their tastes as well as designs.
I would be pleased if your school presents some courses merely for cooking various low-calorie foods. As I care about my calorie-intake regularly in my life I would find this course extremely fruitful for people who are conservative about what to eat. I am a true follower of healthy diets however I always find it impossible to cook them in a way that sounds delicious I just know a few healthy recipes to cook. I am certain your skilled and talented instructors can pass their knowledge in this case.
I am reachable via e-mail at Hivafara77@gmail.com. You could kindly inform me about your future courses at this e-mail.
Thanks for your time and consideration
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as, first of all, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 32.9175257732 173% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 937.175257732 171% => OK
No of words: 324.0 206.0 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93518518519 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95142267793 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 127.690721649 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2891830141 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9375 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292603666247 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854662007167 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075886892871 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14470492663 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617377925094 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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