You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
describe what you enjoyed about the course
Say how much cooking you have done since the course.
suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding the cookery classes feedback which, I took last month at "Awesome Foods Creation" in Ashok Vihar. I have been looking for such kind of classes since long time, but I was not able to join due to multiple reasons.
One my best friend recommended the "Awesome Foods Creation" cookery classes. Specifically, he has emphasized on Chinese food classes. Because now most of the children love to eat French Fries, Chili Potato, Honey Chili Potato as well as Noodle with Manchurians are quite popular.
Consequently, I joined cookery classes at Ashok Vihar location. Chef has taught us different kinds of cuisines, which are more famous in all continentals. Furthermore, teacher was able to teach me, multiple sweets, and quick food recipes. While learning of food preparation at institute was mesmerizing movement for me.
Therefore, I was able to cook variety of food, which is most likable by my family members. Yesterday, I tried Vegetables Pulav at my home and test was delicious, mouthwatering. I am happy to write that, within 10 mintues, all family member has finished that food. In my viewpoint, I should learn more cuisines and variety of food, so I can make happy to my better half with other countries meals.
In last, I would like to thank you so much for your valuable teaching.
Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, kind of, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09565217391 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92662634734 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686956521739 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2750962394 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114374352526 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373851747721 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484169846069 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769213160577 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527745998635 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.