You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority and say:– How did you get to know about the plans?– What problems will your neighborhood face?– Sug

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction about the idea of constructing a new airport in Vasant Mahal. To begin with, I would like to introduce myself, I am a retired government officer who is residing in this realm since fifteen years. But last week we came to know about this notion through a reliable source that is a local news paper "Gyan Bharti".

I will have to confess that this news is quite deplorable for all the citizens here for various legitimate reasons. Firstly, there are approximately twenty thousand people living here that will get disturbed by the noise pollution caused by the aircrafts. Secondly, it will inevitably result into over crowding and increase incidences of traffic jams. Additionally, there are two major schools here and thus it will have adverse effect on the studies of students as well.

Conspicuously, I would like to give you some advice that will at least curtail the immense detrimental effects of it to a certain extent. That is to make the runway far from the residential area and to change the route to reach the airport which means to make the way through Mansa road instead of Mahipalpur.

I apologize for the trouble but I would be grateful if you could make the aforementioned amendments.

Yours sincerely,
Rahul

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Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...rough a reliable source that is a local news paper 'Gyan Bharti'. I will hav...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e that will at least curtail the immense detrimental effects of it to a certain e...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, at least, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87255465534 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.4512819011 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174027791613 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591795226664 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438471999982 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861100808138 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308894243973 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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