Dear Manager,
I am a patron of your hotel and I am writing with regards to keeping a party at your hotel for my best friend's birthday.
It is his 30th birthday and I want to give him a surprise by throwing a party for him at your place since I really like the food and service here.
I want to you to note down the necessary things that are indeed extremely important for the success of this occasion. Firstly, there should be a five pound chocolate cake which I believe will be sufficient for all. The guest list consists of twenty people, so, food should be prepared accordingly and it must include sea food and chicken preparations as well. Overall, there should be two starters, four main course items along with rice and bread. In the last, there should be four varieties of deserts.
Furthermore, party is on 30th November in the evening at around 7.00PM for which I would like to book your pool side hall as it is the best one in your hotel.
Your timely response can help me to take a quick decision.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Manager, I am a patron of your hotel and I am wri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, furthermore, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50785340314 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40102451566 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5592699663 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229232975724 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859480347395 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773149153557 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135716999694 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757062528729 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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