You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Dear Mrs Martha,

I hope you have been keeping well. I am a formal student of yours and I am writing to you requesting to provide a reference letter to me as I am applying for a new job.

It is for the post of HR head in a very prestigious hospital in New Jersey. In fact, it is my dream job since, I always wanted to work in the management field. I firmly believe, I possess skills to manage things wisely. Hence, this opportunity is extremely significant for me and I certainly do not want to miss it. That is why, it would be a good notion to put my first impression the best and for which an excellent reference is essential.

Therefore, it is my humble request to you to give me a letter stating my outstanding performance during college time including some of my rare virtues that impressed you the most. Your support can not only make my resume better but indeed, it will enhance the chances of my selection as well.

Thanking you in anticipation and looking forward for your prompt reply.

Yours faithfully,
John

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49206349206 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69265908023 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3984868171 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220407366893 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749508725672 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690759642637 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138874619603 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703242146508 0.0580467560999 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.